OMG! THAT IS SUPPERB! Ablsolutly full of emotion and you are marvelous at writing- it made me cry! That is just magnificant and full of emotion! |
by Eibutsina
WOW girl I felt the same way when things started going sour between me and my best friend but truth is people grow apart - i was hurt bad like you but then i figured out that i had changed just as much as she had - i loved the time we spent together but it was never supposed to last forever - nothing ever is - so keep ya head up girl things are gunna get easier k |
by Jacklyn
hey great poem, really cool ending! |