The end...(true story)

by Sharon   Nov 19, 2004


It was now or never
As i took my knife
Here i go I'm ending my life
You will watch me as i fall
& you were the one who thought i had it all
but you didn't know the pain the you caused
Right now i feel so alone and lost
You will watch as slowly the blood drips out
I'm killing myself and thats no doubt
This pain i feel deep inside hurts i can no longer stand being alive
Well here it goes,this is the test
i swear i tried,i did my best
Please don't cry for me, it wasn't my fault
It was you who caused the pain,you were the one who started it all
Now you will watch me as i fall
I raise the knife way up high and bring it down on my wrist,I'm here to die
the pain in unbearable
its getting harder to speak,
its as if I'm getting really weak,
I can feel it,this is the end
I have cut a place where you can not mend
Well,Goodbye my love..goodbye world
this is the last that you hear from this girl

i made this because my friend is almost attempting suicide.I'm talking her through it right now and here is a quote i also made for her
So much pain,i don't know what to do,so here i am i take my life,here i go as i raise the knife,love is the slowest form of suicide

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sam

    loves*

  • 19 years ago

    by Sam

    its soo nice of you to help your friend out! its good she has a friend that cares for her so much, and to know there is someone that loves her and that she has something else to live for, aswell as a lot of other people lover her aswell, hope she gets better

    Love sam

    P.s. keep writing

  • 20 years ago

    by Emily-xO

    really good poem i hope she gets better:) keep writingg ur good

    <3 emily

    ps PLEASE read rate and comment my poems it would be nice to get some feedback

  • 20 years ago

    by FakeIt

    hope your friend gets better...
    i lost one of my friends before.
    i tried to help but i didn't make it in time. she died last year but it feels like she died yesterday...
    i think that you are really helping your friend and i hope she understands that suicide isn't the way to go... good luck