Sammi this was excellent and incredible poem... I love it:) So passinate and I liked:

"You don't know everything, neither do I,
But I know that what you're saying is a lie." (I sometimes think that whatever my hun says is a lie:(..)

"You're never to young, you are never to old,
But there's one thing I believe I'll treat love like gold,
I don't know everything but I do know this,
Feelings have no rules and that's all that love is. Nobody's perfect, not you, not I,
But for you I love, I'd trully die,
Love is a feeling, like your heart could matter,
I know I'm in love, so what you say doesn't matter.
"
(Now, this is really true..I fell in love before so many times..and even gettin hurt, but I'm still standing:) and I have my new love in my side now! The Stronger the Love the Better you don't want your love to end or die!!!)

~I really love the poem and I just send this poem to my hun:p.. I should keep on writing cuz I love this one:D.. Check some of mine out if you have any time;)~

*Angels are Guide us every & each day:)* *!*God Bless*!*

~!~ <3 Sedusha <3 ~!~

i agree and it is a beautiful poem

just wanted to comment on your post in discussions--looking for gay poems, well, i have some under my name...check them out:
"real", "lesbian", "lesbian dream",
"you make me" and i think that is it for now. loves.
ps u r a good writer muh dear and love does not have an age u r deeply right.

I love this one one too!!! It's awesome!!! I think this peom is the one that I can relate to the most!!! Good job I loved it!!!
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Yes! I always say, "true love knows no age." This has a very similar idea, and you two wrote a beautiful poem.

One suggestion, I think the line "But for you I love, I'd trully die" would be better as "But for you my love, I would truly die." (*truly has one "l")

Thank you for the comment!

undying blusher
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Hey good poem i liked it alot and thanx for the comment on my poem

Very good poem, shows exactly the feeling