hey goot these are good but i no u can do better my work is my own i can wirte you know ive been doin nearly my whole life....

A beautiful piece my darling. I enjoyed it immensly. Keep up the fantastic work.

Lol i just read carries comment on this she's all...ï can write I've been doin'it my whole life"'
dude anyone can write...it takes skill to make it worth reading...duh
like your skill with any of your poetry your an excellent poet
i love all your work
this one is very bold!!!
keep scribblin'
catch ya

this is the shittiest poem i have ever written. it has no meaning, no depth. its not even basic enough to build on... ugh... what a loser am i!!