Great Job! Have you showed this to Claire yet? You should... Anyway, keep writing!

~lylab Lipton

That's really touching, Clair is really lucky to have you feel about her in such a way--just know that she really doesn't want to hurt you. Just be patient.

God bless

Awww. itz so sweet. I've never fallen in love w/one of my freinds, but I guess it must be hard. it's a very nice poem! loved it , keep writing.