Caught you looking

by ~*^*~ longing to belong ~*^*~   Nov 19, 2004


I saw you staring,
Staring at me,
What did you see?
Staring at me,

Did you see the broken dreams,
Scattered at my feet?
Did you see the torn seams,
That signify my defeat?
Did you see the stormy skies,
Roaring the night through?
Did you see the empty eyes,
Staring back at you?

I caught you looking,
Looking at me,
What did you see?
Looking at me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Paula

    I love this poem, i often wonder if people can see your pain, and if they do, do they care enough to ask. great poem. xx

  • 19 years ago

    by .x.PorteR.x.

    Wow this is incredible keep up the awesome work! I love how you repeated the first stanza at the end and the whole way the second stanza was written..

    Keep it up!

    xox, PorteR

  • 19 years ago

    by _the_punk_kid_

    every sentence is really deep, a really good piece well done:)beanxx

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Beautifully tragic! This is short but it said so much in those few words. I loved it! Great job~Holly

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