Beautifully tragic! This is short but it said so much in those few words. I loved it! Great job~Holly

every sentence is really deep, a really good piece well done:)beanxx

Wow this is incredible keep up the awesome work! I love how you repeated the first stanza at the end and the whole way the second stanza was written..

Keep it up!

xox, PorteR

I love this poem, i often wonder if people can see your pain, and if they do, do they care enough to ask. great poem. xx