Wow that's sooo good! I like the way it's written with the way of talking and everything... wow that is amazing!

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Keep it up, xox, PorteR

GREAT JOB!!!you completely had me in that ditch watching that bomb drop!!!! i mean wow.
so beautiful and capturing!
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WWII truly was, in many respects, a battle between good and evil. Recent ones have been far too muddled by the evils present on both sides of war. So I can see where someone surviving WWII would see a certain deevolutionary trend, and a complete lack of wisdom and understanding.

Oh! And I must add that I truly enjoyed the dialectic addition... truly gave a unique tone to the narration.