woo love it

wow excellent poem!

It's amazing what you can do with your words...truely it is...loved the poem...
***With smiles***
Scooby

wow, love the imagery. "licking down my back and thighs," iloved how you painted a picture of the storm and used simple details to make it more beautiful and effective. i really appreciated the last stance, "so I endure the
sting of this midnight storm
for it veils the beat of crimson
to her tongue. "
i love that you cokpare the girl, (or relationship?) to a storm and your choicer of symbolism and imagery is impecible, keep it up

Deep, very deep.

Wow! Thank you all! :)

This one is cleverly weaved with a bit of hidden passionate love... I'm not quite sure whether it has anything at all to do with an actual storm, or if it's simply a metaphor... either way, extremely enjoyable piece...