Secrets Unknown ...

by MirMir   Nov 20, 2004


So many secrets in my brain,
if I don't let them out I'll go insane.
On the outside I'm all smiles and laughter,
but no one sees what goes on after.

After the laughs I'm left to cry,
I sit and smile when I really want to die.
After the good times I feel depressed,
finally my mind I will put to rest.

In my life there has been many lost hopes,
and with this life I will no longer cope.
I now take my life, I have let too much be shown,
but in my heart there are still secrets unknown.

Copyright MirMir
11/20/04

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  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Wow this poem is really good.=)

  • 20 years ago

    by Rachel

    its a really great poem but its kinda surface level and thats always easier for people to understand but if you take the time you can make this more personalized.

    anyhoo great poem. hope things get turned around for you

  • 20 years ago

    by ?

    V.gd poem, Stay strong(sorry for the cheesyness) as deadnalone sed theres always some1 there, jst sometimes you don't relise. keep writing, take care
    x

  • 20 years ago

    by Queen Marlene

    I loved it! I feel that this poem tells the story of my life it is great!! keep it up!!

  • 20 years ago

    by deadnalone

    be strong u can make it thru. thers always someone hoo cares. good poem.

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