wow...this was breath-taking. just so amazing and compelling. very imaginative and creative. i love it! i could see everything in my mind, picturing like it was a nightmare. wonderful poem!!! this deserves the highest rating possible!

Yes the Labirynth, thats where I got the insperation from. Many parts in this poem are from that movie, not exactly the same, or in the same order. But I changed it to my needs and how I thought would fit. But you are 100% correct.

wow, i love the use of words, "taineted pastels" it really paints a lovely picture, and i love that you rstarted out with something lovely but then transformed it into a nightmare. the way that you described the clothes ripping off and the masks revealing monstrous faces, great us of symbolism. it was also clever to add the lines about the people trapped in snow globes, i really took a liking to that. great job,

even though the last couple lines spoil the grim, dark atmosphere a bit, i still love this poem! the language is so good that as i read i could actually imagine being in that nightmare. i won;t sleep tonight!