by Unseen Exposure Nov 20, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
It's beautiful the way your hand beams from the light in the ceiling |
by amber
Beautifully written :) i loved it. I could just see the clouds in Heaven and the angels. I could hear the fluttering of angel wings. I could hear the tear fall from your cheek. I could hear it and see it all. Good imagery. You're a very talented writer and I hope you continue to write :D |
I really liked it, good job |
by Kendra
Hey! OK, so thats like my favorite poem ever. It is wikid good, and I love it. I love all your poems, they are so beautiful. great job! |
by Alissa
beeeaaauuuttttiiiiffffuuuullllll =) |
ilgfhsfohgosi!!! Sorry about that I couldnt seethe keyboard my eyes wasnt in focus yet from the tears I shead. That was so deep i had to read it twice |