Excellent poem... take care

wow, this was such an incredibly, no other word, pretty poem. the beginning was so lovely, it really did give me pleasent feeling as i read it.
"Life wisped by me as a tear rolled down my face
For once, I was smiling, I felt love in your embrace
Careful, weaving movements as we tiptoed across the floor
One step forward, one step back, every surface to explore"
so beautiful, 'careful weaving moments' such a pretty line. and i have to admit when the lines came, "ill meet you in heaven" i had to hold back tears. such a lovely poem, the ending line at each stance, "are we dancing yet" and then at the end..."we were dancing" gives it a tragic but happy love story. i loved it, great job

That must have been one of the best poems i have ever read! What can i say? The story was so captivating and the structure was surely unique. Great, great, great job!!!!!! 5,5,5,5,5,5,5...

its beautiful. i cried. i loved it

soo goood i love it!!!!

wow, i love all of your poems but you truly out did yourself in this one. it was amazing! definitly a 5! i cried a bit even. please check out my poems and let me know what you think!
xo-Brittany-ox

hay i like your poem it was realll good

wheeew, what a dramatic poem!

ilgfhsfohgosi!!! Sorry about that I couldnt seethe keyboard my eyes wasnt in focus yet from the tears I shead. That was so deep i had to read it twice

beeeaaauuuttttiiiiffffuuuullllll =)

Hey! OK, so thats like my favorite poem ever. It is wikid good, and I love it. I love all your poems, they are so beautiful. great job!

~Kendra~

I really liked it, good job

Beautifully written :) i loved it. I could just see the clouds in Heaven and the angels. I could hear the fluttering of angel wings. I could hear the tear fall from your cheek. I could hear it and see it all. Good imagery. You're a very talented writer and I hope you continue to write :D
Thanks
~*~Amber~*~