this is really good! im sry bout w/e you have to go through! keep writeing

wow, this is really clever. i love how you brought attention to all of the hyppocritical things going on in society that people preach not to do but thne practice themselves, then discriminate against something because they don't understand it. good job.

WOW, WOW, WOW. I love this, its layout, the way it flows, the message behind it. It's a suberb poem. really thought provoking. WOW, you have great talent. tc, xmollyxx