WOW...this is by far the sadest poem i have ever read, it brang tears to my eyes, you did a beautiful job...and i am sorry about your father.
take care..
Scooby

thnx, i just really wanted to make a poem for my dad that came from my heart and its gonna be a year that hes been gone on the 26th of november of 2004 and i miss him with all my heart, im also glad you liked it and that it brought tears to your eyes!

Wow it brought tears to my eyes and stay strong !

Wow that is a really great poem. i actually cried. its very sad but very good. keep it up :D

<3 Angie