Aww that is very sad to hear. The poem was very good. That would have been very hard to write but I think your friend would be very happy and would feel blessed to have such a caring frind. God Bless. Luv Nicole =)

wow that was very nice, and sorry about your friend!

awww, that is so sad! i am sorry about your friend. wonderful poem!!

sorry to hear aout ur friend ur poem was pretty good too but i loved the line at the end. remember u told me to tell u what my poem "red is a beautiful color" meant. At the beginning I won't actually doing those things to him but in my mind I was, I wanted him to feel exactly what I felt, I wanted to do to him what he done to me. But I realized if that happened no one would get anything out of it, that wouldn't make me feel better. So the second verse I was saying that I am not mad at what he done I just felt sorry for him.

great poem i love it! i feel really bad for your friend i hope the best for you and her! keep up the great writing

Love, Taylor

thank you guys so much...i will update you on how krissy is doing if u would like to know. as of now, we still dont know.

Aww..I hope She is better..I shall Pray for her!!!

Chris

awwwww!! amaazing poem!!
although its really sad, but i love it!
it was really great !