I think your poem was good I loved the way you expressed yourself in it too. Remember u had commented on my poem "red is a beautiful color" and u almost got what I was tring to say. I was thinking about slicing that other person not actually doing it. I wanted him to go through exactly what I was when he cut me. But at the second verse I realized that it wouldn't fix anything. So instead of feeling mad about it I felt sad for him because he have to hurt others to make himself feel better.

Beautiful poem.. I like the way you write.. you have your own unique way.. keep up the GREAT work
BaByE XxxX-Cath

Wow...the only word i can think of to describe that poem. Your style is unique and different. Keep it up! I can relate to this poem alot!
Love, Lauren

What can I say? Nefariously beautiful.