Comments : Help me to fix and mend

  • 20 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    great poem, the second from last stansa is amasing. its easy to empathise with you. loving the poems

  • 20 years ago

    by deadnalone

    Thats is really good lu. Im not just saying coz i always do. Well done on your award. Keep writing.
    Always ere
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  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    another excellent poem! you are an amazing writer! keep it up...