Wow...this poem was passioonate and I loved the the loving words...:)Keep it up Jason... 5/5...

~!~Sedusha~!~

I totally agree. Great job, and keep writing!

~ciao Lipton

I likr this, so many people throw around the word love and don't pay attention to it's meaning.

Great Poem...

..............Speechless.....WOW, um...that was by far such a beauitful poem....wow i am stumped for words and this comes from a person who can't shut up..lol
take care
Scooby

Very sadly wonderfully, giddily, precipice-hanging true.