great poem, such a sad message, but brilliantly written. wel dun!! keep it up!!

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wow! excellent poem! i love it, and can also relate. i rate this a 5 all the way!

beautifull well written, your poems are great!!

I got goosbumps when I read this. There are just some poems that leave tingles running up and down your spine and this was one of them to me. You have tons and tons of talent. Never stop writing.
With love, K. Kristina

Loved this poem, absolutly, loved it... great job.. u couldnt have done it better.
xox
samz~*

Luvly poem, i can relate to that feeling so much, no body really knows what you might be feeling under the skin, they can only look at book by the cover unless you open the pages. But i know from my own experiance, opening those pages is not always an easy thing and can make a whole lot more pain. Stay safe, an enjoy life as best you can.