by confusion
wow, so much emotion shown. i know i dont know you, but im sure there are people out there who care for you and would miss you so much if you left. |
by jescelle
sweety, i cried......hunnie, please dont do this again, i know how it is....i love you |
very good poem, both pt 1 n 2 |
by blarg
don't don't don't kill yourself! you are a talented writer, don't waste your gift! |
by Unloved ♥
Can you say WHOA, because thats what I kept saying after every single line. Andrea, pills, drugs, please don't do them. ya know drug use is life abuse, all its going to do is make your life worse, and u don't want that. I'm sorry you feel like you have to take pills to end all this, but really Logan and friends seem liek they really care about you, so if I were you I wouldn't do it. I mean your such a great writer and I would hate for you to stop writing. And if this poem isn't true, well, good job, its a bit scary who'd want to do that, but these your thoughts, nice job!! WHOA now my comment was really long huh ahah look<<<^^^^^ now thats what I call a comment, anyways aha bye!! |
that was like wow i dnt kno wut to say.. that was like one of the fkn best poems i have red...... wow.. by the way was that a true story????hmmm and the pills were they eccstact sorry ima but dumb! lol but good job darlz! |
by Incognito
Wow that poem was really amazing. I admire that you tell it the way it is. It makes me sad and scared that no one was there for you. I would've saved you if i could have dude. |
hey great poem its very long but worth it =) lol! is this story true? if it is i am so sorry but never ever kill yourself things always get better you'll see! if you ever need to talk email me at pretti_pink_angel@hotmail.com luv ya xxxxx and well done! |
by Lauren
HoNeY, i just signed up at this site and i was reading your poems and you are one amazing writer! one of the best i have ever read. but please do not try and do this stuff again..i thought it was a great poem until i realized it was about you..then it made me wanna cry. girl please dont do that stuff ever ever again! you are worth way more than some cheap thrills! if u need to talk, hit me up asap! |
by jescelle
hunnie please email me, we can talk |
by amanda
hey sweety, |
by joe
BUUUUDY!!!!!!! |
dont kill yoursle fdont kill yoruself dont kill yourself dont kill yourself.....youre too good for death |
by CaL25
This was really good.. I read the part 1 as well.. Hey girl, ending your life is foolish.. Don't ever think of that.. There is still a long way ahead for you yea?Do take great care alright.. =) |
by jescelle
hey tiff n aisha, why dont you try to go to school with like 20 pills in ya and then see how you feel! before you can say ANYTHING you gotta go through what shes been through, so dont even talk |
wow great job thanks for commenting on my poems |
by Eibutsina
WHOA girl this was so deep _ i could relate from somethings i have been thru in the past - more than welcome to email just check my profile if you want support, a friend or just an ear |
by jescelle
andrea, please email me your worrying me..................... |
by *Elizabeth*
WOAH!! crazy powerful!! extremely good!!! very different style from anything I have ever read, but Its one of my faves!!! I just wish you the best!! you deserve it!! take care and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep yourself safe! |
Excellent poem, ahh you're such a wonderful poet and i truely mean it. Keep well and take care and thank you so much for your comments. |