by Cassandra
Ive felt like this SOO many times b4 I've been on almost every drug you cant think of I LOVE this poem |
by Taylor
great poem! i love it! it's good you got it out! i hope you don't do this again it's a little scary just stay safe! great writing! |
this is a great poem and all but if u need anyone to talk to 4 ne thing im here 4 ya. ok. stay strong. |
by kathy
i've been through that a couple of times.....if its about you...blah..dont do it...and yes..but this was an awesome poem |
by xeag
YOU SHOWED ALOT OF EMOTION THROUGHOUT THIS WHOLE POEM I KNOW THINGS CAN GET TOUGH AND YOUR NEVER ALONE YOUR REALY WITH PPL WHO LOVE AND CARE ABOUT YOU IF YOU NEED TO TALK.... |
Wow...what an amazing poem. that is really really scary though my love, you have to be careful. I hope everything works out wonderfully dear. If you ever need to talk, i'm always here! |
by ReBecca
i give five on content, because you were obviously trying to say something. but as far as writing... i'm sorry but i could find no ryme. i hope that you have recovered from whatever you were going throgh |
by ReBecca
p.s if you kill ypurself, what do you have to look forward to? when you die, everything is completly over with. not just the bad....but the good too... it might seem like now there is no good, but trust me, there is... and if for you there isnt, then please read my poem "children on this site" and know that i will be here for you in anyway that i can. |
Hey that poem is so awesome and I know how you feel. I used to want to kill myself because of my mom. But it's not worth it! Thin of all the people thaty would be hurt and all the things that would be left undone. |
wow, amazing, is this true? wow. wow. I really loved this poem, you are such a wonderful writer... wow. |
by Leyesto
great poems alot of emotion , well keep u the good writing and well just keep writing your good at it |
by Denise John
Hey gurl, please dont do that anymore |
by Dani
pimped out girl....thats sounds like an experience i had but i like woke up two days later (literally) and i was inside my class reading a book...kinda weird i didnt even know the day or nothing....kinda crazy....but GREAT |
by Jacklyn
hey great poem, better then the first one, but you need the first one to know what was goin on, keep it up :) PLP |
by Malenda
I love your poem but doing this to yourself is not the answer!!!! |
by MoveAlong
Stay strong and move on. When life gets to heavy tell a friend and give them a bit of the weight. They'll be happy to hold it for a while. My friend took pills and came to school. I had to help her. It scared me. It wasn't worth it for her in the end. She lived but bearly. Dont do this to you. Your worth more than that. If that doesnt stop you think about your friends and how much it must hurt them to see you the way you were. |