Suicidal Failure

by ElegantlyWasted   Nov 22, 2004


I'm the screaming in your head
and the darkness after light

I'm your never ending struggle
no matter how hard you fight

I'm the shards of glass in your heart
and the never ending pain

I'm the demons in your mind
and the needle in your vein

I'm the fragile part of your soul
and the suicide notes you write

I'm the feelings that you hate at night
and the times you jump with fright

I'm the tears you cry alone
and the blood that you seep

I'm the cuts up and down your arms
and the hidden secrets that you keep

I'm all the friends that you have lost
and the lies they've told about you

I'm the parents who were never around
and the days when you are blue

I'm all the times you've fallen in love
and the people that left you broken

I'm the frown that won't wash away
and all the words left unspoken

I'm the devil that will kill you
and leave you gasping for air

I'm the one who doesn't spare anyone
and i don't care if life's not fair

I'm the silent prayers you hold inside
and the cold nights that you give in

I'm the evil that you have feared
and the battles you will never win

I'm the final breath that you will take
and the last words that you speak

I'm the knife that sinks into your skin
and the laughing you hear because you are weak

I'm the last person you'll see tonight
and the blood that seeps from every layer

I'm the terrible burning inside your soul
Because your just another suicidal failure.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    hey girl! i love this poem it's really creative like i would have only came up with half those ideas that you got lol so go you! and when u did the definitions of lonlyiness and stuff in my poem that was real cool lol

    ~lil slam~ take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Pablo

    Hey thanks for your poem. I wanted to leave one for you too. I appreciate your work. Its all very good.

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    wow! omg! i've written a lot of poems and read a lot but this is one of the best i have ever read! this is a really great poem and it's amazing! i love it! keep up the great work!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    i loved it, it was so good, so sad, i loved it so much, im gunna redommend you to my friends, whom also love poetry...great job with this one

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    thank you for the comment. i loved this poem it was amazing and true. u r talented as well