Loving You.!.!.

by Saravana Kumar S   Nov 22, 2004


The first time i saw you,i was in a state of shock,
i felt someone was trying to break my heart's lock,
to bring in all the feelings that love could bring,
so that my heart starts flying even without a wing.

Never did i come across a beauty as perfect as u are,
your eyes could compete even with the brightest star,
comparing your beauty with each and every single star,
i wonder is there anyone in this universe like you are.

your each and every word whenever they touch my ears,
i feel like i have been waiting for those words for years.
your smile brings happiness whenever my heart is hurt,
i guess it would bring life even on the barren desert.

Even though you haven't touched me,i can still feel you,
because deep inside my heart,my love for you is so true,
joining those stars,i will write your name in the sky,
so that you can always feel my love,even after i die.

I haven't completely described your beauty and it's night,
i still haven't found a single word that could fit right,
If in simple words i have to tell you-Your are my life,
just remember wherever u go,you will always be my life.

Surely there is no one whom i love more than you,
even if there is a chance,i guess i won't do,
b'coz this heart within me belongs only to you,
till my dying day,I'll be with you,"Loving You".

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