Death

by Daniel   Nov 22, 2004


Why should I live? Nobody is out there to stop me. I can just drive this car right into a lake and close my eyes think about the loves I will miss. Water gets higher maybe its not to late to stop my self. Up too my nose the water goes. Now I know its too late to turn back. My life flashes before my eyes mom, dad, brother and sister the girl I loved all gone and I did it to my self. Car filled with water I stop moving. I see the light. Is this the light every one talkes about? Then the light goes back to a dim light. I get sucked back into my body I see a hand reaching for me.......... I have been giving a another............I can say life. I grap it thanking god for saving me this time. But what about NEXT TIME............. WHO WILL BE THERE FOR ME!!!!!!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Daniel

    Thank you for telling me that my poem is good I like it and sometimes I feel like that when this girl I have friends with for about 9 years doesnt like me like that so what are you going to do right but thanks again

  • 20 years ago

    by Lucy

    you should live, you are a talented poet
    beautiful soul...nice job
    lee nicole

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