by Lucy Nov 22, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I'm gonna tell you a story |
by Luke
uhmm...i dont really get it. it begins like its going to be a short story but then the actual story is maybe 10-20 lines. and the ending kinda confused me. the flow seemed a little choppy and a little rhyme might have help (with the flow). i dont know, im not a professional, just my opinion. peacee |
by Andrea
wow! amazing poem! i love it! |