This is a NiCe poem!! Keep on writing... come check min eout (if you don't mind)
BaByE XxxX-Cath

great work, I just wish it could really happen only to me death and imortality all in one the thirst for human blood with reason unknow a vamire by day and night my pain to disipear and be gone for "life" Oh well its impossible right I just wish I had the reasurance it was'nt that it could happen to me.wish I was called to the dark from the darkness I put my self in and others to live sur- real. Tell ya one thing mortality and life sucks theres only so much you can do be for you die yet no one will love you and no one gets the pain, yet they've felt it them selfs and passed it on. Lucky for them at least they can.If they knew what happened to me and my friend who I know call my angle they would truly understand. No I'm not crazy though sometimes I wish I was, I'm just a so called normal teen wanting nothing but death for my life is no longer happy and never will be agian, though it seems it to everyone else. anyway keep up the work your a really great poet and I'm sure its nice to be a vampire in the mortal way, good luck with any more.

thank you for your comments i try to write my best and i write whats in my soul if that gives you any idea what my soul looks like lol

Steven aKa Leyesto

Nice, I like your whole vampiri9c theme...Now do you really believe all that is which i wonder? Either way it was good..5!--Ash--