by Ashamed Nov 23, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Another day, another morning alone in a single bed. |
by Seule
Hey, i really liked this poem! Great use of Repetition and rhyme! Most poems with repetition of lines bore me to death, but this one seemed to just have the right amount. Great job. |
by Ashamed
Thanks for all the great comments. |
by confusion
good poem, the repetition works really wel. good job! |