Comments : Alone

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    good poem, the repetition works really wel. good job!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashamed

    Thanks for all the great comments.

  • 19 years ago

    by Seule

    Hey, i really liked this poem! Great use of Repetition and rhyme! Most poems with repetition of lines bore me to death, but this one seemed to just have the right amount. Great job.