wow, that poem really describes my fam, down to the teeth. she'll love this one. anything to make her happy brings joy to my life. and for that, i rate this one a five.

WOW. Absolutely amazing poem, sadly i can really realte to it. WOW, it has great diction, flow and rhythm. once agian amazing poem, take care. xmollyxx

awe that poem was so good. Terribly sad though. Suicide is never the best way. keep your head up, thing'll get better
You're an awesome writer! I hope to read more

Keep on smiling
*Katie*

this was very touching and sad......im sorry your mom is like that, i hope you're alright hun, keep your head up, if you ever need to talk, ill be here that probably doesnt help because we dont know eachtoher, but just in case.....take care of yourself, and keep on writin' you've got some talent =) ~lots of love and hugs~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Holy f uck that poem was good! I mean, da mn! I loved it. that is how i feel with my mom too, she says things like just go kill yourself, or just go cry, just go cut yourself, and stuff too. anywayz I loved your poem. Keep up the good work

I like this! Is it true? I know you said that you don't write about personal experiences, but what about this? I did like it!

I like this! Is it true? I know you said that you don't write about personal experiences, but what about this? I did like it!

WoW!! ur poem is beautiful but sad..ur such a good poet! keep up the good work..♥

OMG when did you meet my mum? thats exactly what i want to say to her thank you for giving me the words but for you i hope november 12th never comes lol chiaki xox

OMG i've been trying to find this poem for ages lol i luvs you xox