great poem, i can really picture what your trying to say. Great Job! :oD

wow...i could invision everything you were saying...i love your word usage. it makes it so perfect!
xo-Brittany-ox

so lovely, it really painted a lovely picture. just beautiful, the imagery was so pleasent and heart warming. and i liked the ending, it was a sad, but a lovely state of ending life in such a beautiful moment. great job

alright....im sorry...i thought the girl killed herself, now im really embarassed i read it wrong...

ok, well at least you know your still an amazing poet and this was a lovely piece

masterpiece 5>>>>>>>