this is a great poem, but that must have been one sad dream, great job..

Amazing poem although sad. Keep up the good work.

Oh my gosh..*tear*..geesh that made me cry! But dang even if it wasn't true how sad!! I'm glad that didn't happen how painful would that be?! Anys your poems are awsome! great JOb Don't stop writing! 5/5 of course!
~Chelsey~

it was great! very emotional....i had tears in my eyes. keep up the good work!!
xo-Brittany-ox

WOW! Ran chills all over me. Beautiful poem, so touching. lol Ann

awwww......this is soo sad..i luv it...definate 5!!

Wow thats a really good poem! its soo sad! keep up the good work!!! :)

one word for this......trash. only joking! this is one of the most beautiful p[oems ive read for a LONG time.

i love ur writing!