wow, this was absolutly beautiful. your word choice is perfect and the particualr vocabulary you use gives the peice a certain effect. The imagery is warm and dreamy, i love the lines,
"perused by candlelight,
the crackle of torchflame"
and

"your single tear
cascading into my
waiting caress.... "
Your writing creates such a lovely image but makes it so much more beautiful than common words could ever do. fantastic job