Gr8 poem sad though! keep it up and i don't know if i have already but Thanks 4 your comments they really mean alot:) |
by Unloved ♥
I can so relate, very nice! |
by Danny
No, I'm fine. Its just a way to vent my spleen |
by Danny
Thanx for your comments. Especial you Nahla thanx |
by Danny
*especially* |
Thougt i should just let you know that yes i do write bad poems:) |
by Danny
Wow its a miracle you are human! lol |
More human then you think!! Oh and the discussions are really interesting don't stop them |
by Danny
Ok then i wont stop making these comments in to a discussion |
by Ele
it was a goodish poem dan but cud ya at least hav made it a little more light-hearted, u know how i feel bout people sayin they wana kill themselves. by the way, ur not allowed to, i wont let u an if u do i will refuse to go to ur funeral an ill cry, do u really want me to cry? |
thats a reallt good poem and i'm sry u feel that way, the worlds not fair but theres never a good enough reason to kill urself no matter what happens in life, i'm happy u didnt kill urself and i'm sry if u still feel like u want to die. |
I am now officially a fan of your work! Great job! |
by Nicole
great poem. i feel the exact same way. keep it up and keep writing ur poems are very good. |
by kate
Wow amazing excellant poem love it but so sad.Don't die.Take cae and keep up the writting |