excellent poem allie, very very deep... shows again ur talent.
luv u always and forever xox ~Samz!~

What a wonderful poem...Love it!

Keep Well
xx - Kalah

awesome poem. i love the smooth aproach and delicate wording. keep writing!

great job! 5/5 PLP

~lil slam~

Good poem... keep writing.
Sorry, I have absolutely nothing else to say, lol, I am gobbersmacked, so, thoughts aren't processing right now.
:-)

I like this poem it is very open and revealing. you put a lot of emtion into it. i like the short choppy lines it made the poem flow very well

i love this stanza

Blood would flow
As the River Stix
Tears fall from heaven
The liquids then mix

i for one am very intrested in Greek Mythology and its cool that you could use the river as a symbol in your poem its really good could you do me a favor and read some of mine please thanks and awesome job