by butterfly ♥ kisses Nov 24, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Today I saw you for what seemed like |
awwwww!!!! thats SOOO AMAAAZING!! i almost had the same story!! gosh , i just hate it when love begins , its like forever, and then , our hearts just break, and forget everythin we had that was beautiful ! ..well,,,sorry for that .. but i feel the same way ,,,,!!! and im still feeling bad about it! |
by Bizarre
that depresses me. i hate break ups. but its a good poem. good job. |
Wow... Awesome poem!!! It was well-written, had a good format, and was easy for me to relate to. I really, really like your writing style. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to reading some more of your poetry. |
amazing poem. you have such talent, im very jealous !!! i know how you feel when you write this but just be strong and it'll be worth it |
by goot
Truly great... it feels great to get over a guy you get stuck on for ages, but then theres that scary feeling of what happens next huh? Any way, love the work |