Hmm.. pretty creepy, not normally what I'd expect to read from you.. but STILL it was excellent! Definitely could see your touch! =) Take care and have a great Thanksgiving tomorrow!

i really liked this poem. i espacially liked the stance,
"Life is the epitome of creation,
for without it there is only sweet,
sad salutation..."
i love the word choice. i also really appreciated the lines you wrote about women, they really spoke to me. and i also like the metaphor of a river, quite lovely. good job

I have never, not once in my life, heard poetry as great as yours.
in my mind i put you up there with d.ickinson and poe.
i honestly and truely find you one, if not the, greatest writer to exist.