Once upon a Dream

by ChildofGod87   Nov 25, 2004


Once upon a dream
I thought I felt your sweet touch
I thought I seen your passionate
Eyes with glow
I thought I was with you
For the whole time
But then I guess I wasn't,
Cuz I awaken from you
Saying my name so sweet that
Shivered inside by your voice!

I wish I was with you though..
Holding..
Kissing..
Looking into your eyes..
It's like a wish come true
Just to be with "You"
I know that you know

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jason

    Great poem!! i especially liked the line "It's like a wish come true
    Just to be with "You"" Keep up the good work =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    i liked this poem a lot...it had some real feelings in it....take care and keep writing....FIVE>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    I like this poem, infact i like alot of your poems! You are a beautiful poet and i have enjoyed checking out your stuff :)

    Thanks for your lovely comments, you are truely wonderful!

    Keep well
    xx - Kalah

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Thank you for your wonderful comment Christa:)!

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