by In_Your_Eyes Nov 25, 2004
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Let not your mind be troubled |
by lisa marie
Great job. I loved the message in this poem. |
by Robert
The second to the last paragraph needs some work on it but all in all a good poem I really did like the message you conveyed it well... |
by ntv650
Hey you commented on one of my poems, felt obliged to read one of yours...ended up reading most of them. This I found one of the most inspirational, bloody well done! |
i have a ?. to get the comments award, you have to make 30+ comments on other pplz poems, right? |
awesome poem! that is one of my favorites! i especially liked the middle. keep up the great work! |