awesome poem! that is one of my favorites! i especially liked the middle. keep up the great work!

i have a ?. to get the comments award, you have to make 30+ comments on other pplz poems, right?

Hey you commented on one of my poems, felt obliged to read one of yours...ended up reading most of them. This I found one of the most inspirational, bloody well done!

The second to the last paragraph needs some work on it but all in all a good poem I really did like the message you conveyed it well...

Great job. I loved the message in this poem.