Wow. Love this one too!! I think its cool to write a poem about a "she". Who is this girl in your poem? Is she anything like the girl in my poem "How many words is this picture worth?" If so than we are more similar than we think..lol..you get what I mean right? This is a beautiful deep poem. Honestly, never stop writing. Mashalla..you have talent sent from God.

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

Your words inspire an image tornado.
The course of a girl trapped in daydream and by choice. Aware of all the epic possibility of love even before a love is known.
Excelent.
Hopeful for what's to come.

Another "beautiful and descriptive" poem that you've weaved here!! Your words are used very nicely to string together a sorrowful, yet beautiful poem.

*Thanks for commenting on my poem - I really appreciate it! Yeah, unfortunately, I'm still stuck at 13 years old. It sucks. ;)

hey its me again..lol I really liked this one..these are my favorite lines:
she had acid fed fears
and needlepoint tears.
she let her pretty castles
crumble in the unforgiving
and rust in worn despair, in white silence.
I really like it..has a lot of feeling
Keep it up!

that was fantastic, i love how ur words flow together perfect keep it up