Why u went away

by saurabh_poeticheart   Nov 25, 2004


As i sit in my room,
on this pale and gloomy day.
all i can think about is,
what made you go away?

did i do something odious?
or was it on your side?
so many questions i cant answer,
so many emotions i cant hide.

the moment you walked off,
leaving me with a bleeding heart.
all the dreams we shared,
i could see them falling apart.

you cant feel my pain,
you cant hear my cry.
have you gone too far to return?
or u don't want to try?

i knew you wont come back,
once you said goodbye.
yet i cant lose my hopes,
cos , without you my life is as empty as clear blue sky.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Omg... I totally love your poem because it soo ... unexplainable.. the good sentence fluency, the good choices of words....the mood.. the settings... amazing....you are a good writer... and I hope you really know that deep down in your heart, and you will keep on writing... keep it up with the amzing job you have done!

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven

    don't feel bad dude =/ cause my gf left me.... i never did any thing bad to her... but she just left me

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