good poem. girl just get rid of that loser !! he doesn't deserve you and no girl should be second best. be strong and it'll be worth it
best wishes
x ShEll x

That was incredible, I had the same problem and because you love them your vision is clouded but girl, you shouldn't let anyone treat you with anything but respect...good luck with your jerk! lol. and keep up the good work

Omg... I totally love your poem because it soo ... unexplainable.. the good sentence fluency, the good choices of words....the mood.. the settings... amazing....you are a good writer... and I hope you really know that deep down in your heart, and you will keep on writing... keep it up with the amzing job you have done!