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by In_my_own_shadow Nov 25, 2004 category : Sadness, depression / about death
"A million words wont bring you back, I know because I've tried, Neither will a million tears, I know because I've cried" Remember when you held me in your arms way back when? All I want is to see your face once again After you left, all I felt was pain, Myself I often blamed The harder I tried to bring you back, The more my life turned black You told me several times that you loved me, We were Great Grandmother and Great Granddaughter...best friends; just you and me became we I went to see you practically every day, You were never lonely with me there...so you'd say When you got sick that Christmas Eve, I never let go...I still do believe Three times...I went to see you and you were in that hospital bed, Tubes down your throat...every time I went to see you my heart bled On January 15, 2000...my best friends birthday, you left my side, I never let go and I couldnt No matter how hard I'd try Sometimes I feel I've gone insane, But no matter how many good memories there are, there are always the bad ones that contain the pain In memory of Norma Luck, Deceased January 15, 2000*~*True story...plz vote and comment*~* Thank you!
by Danny
what a brilliant read. You have a handle on the emotions needed to write all types of poetry
by Johnny Marlin 2
Great poem, keep up the good work, and take care
by Ashamed
Touching poem... I'm sorry for what happened... be ok =)