Just because your poem is at the end doesnt mean it deserves a comment i think that every poem deserves a comment

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very good and i really liked it so keep it up

Omg... I totally love your poem because it soo ... unexplainable.. the good sentence fluency, the good choices of words....the mood.. the settings... amazing....you are a good writer... and I hope you really know that deep down in your heart, and you will keep on writing... keep it up with the amzing job you have done!