hehe wow what a great poem! Very descriptive words and amazing work!! Keep on writting this was really excellent!
Shannon

thank you on your comment,its really important to me!!

~*~spankumz for ur comment on my poem, i did write it on hate because i hate my brother...i write my poems when i am sad or depressed or in a writing mood..that is why...nice poem btw~*~

oOo...great poem!! keep it up....keep your head up ~much love~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

again thank you....