Awww that is so sad hun, I loved it though,. it was an excellent story line, it flowed really well and it was so incredible! Don't let whoever rated it a 3 get you down, it's worth like, 10, and I'd give you a 10 for this poem, if onlny I could. I absolutly adored it and I'm sure many other people do/will...If this poem is how you feel, then I hope you feel better soon, Amazing work, keep writing hun xxxxxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCareBabexx

Good job, and I do agree with •.CrIms0nReGreT.•, if this is how you feel then I hope u feel better soon =)

plz check my poems I wanna see what you think of mine. Thanks!

Love,
Fatimah

Awww...this was awsome..Its so sweet especially whenn a guy feels this way..but i am sory for whatever..i do agree with crimsonregret also because this was worth like a 10 it was just amazing and it had a terrific flow to it! Great JOb~ Keep your head up
~Chelsey~

Thanx guys, but if it's so good, then why is it rated so low?
Ben

Because some people dont appreciate great work, It really is good Ben, a lot of people just go around and rate poems low so they wont get on top rated recent poems. They're jealous, long story short, of course you wont believe me, but I bet that's why....

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

this is soooo awesome! I could read it over and over again and it would never get old..keep it up 5outta5 for sure!
Shanney

i hope u find that universe once again.. if u are feeling this i am sorry, this poem i have felt and it is a bit lonly out there but i hope that u do find true happiness, and may god be forever with u. for this is hard times and ur scars will mend with time and time alone. u must grow and love once again.

faithfulserenity

Such touching words...some nice imagery, good rhyming, and emotion shown well.

xxx

Shades of grey, Sure makes sense.
5/5

Sorry to know you feel down.
x

Wow I know how it feels like when your world is grey.

I feel like my heart broke with you in this poem. Im sorry for your loss, but through that loss you created a magnificent poem. And props for that. <3