This poem is...sad...I'm sorry about your parents....I know how it feels

Holy crap..That describes perfectly how I feel now..They act all good to you..When family is there..Then when the leave..It's hell

Great Job..I loved it..Big Five

Chris

this is a great poem, keep it up. but i hope things get betta for you. ok. i noe how this feels sorta. so take care and stay strong,..

Ill give u a five...its so sad...

Wow...that was a very amazingly well writen poem. It really makes me think...I'm sorry you have to go through all of that! If you ever need to talk...i'm always here
Peace,
Sammy

i love the theme about being free, which is why it features in so many of my poems, but this has so much more depth to being free and being trapped than any of my poems do! i'm so sorry that you have a life like that, and hope you have a perfect life in the future. maybe a future poet one day! excellant stuff all the best xxx

i know so much of what u r feeling right now--my parents stand me in my face say i will never amount to n e thing, my dad says he hates me, and all we do is argue argue argue...i would do n e thing to impress them but i guess nothing can work:( i love this poem muh dear and u know what i see how everyone on here says there parents r just like this...well f**k over our parents...we can make it w/ or w/o them...u know what just believe in urself babygirl...ur parents will regret all they done love ya

this is sad, i'm sorry that you have to go throughtis, it's not fair, and it's not what you deserve, it's not what any child deserves.... please check out 2 of my poems... "children on this site" and "no parental access".. you might connect with them.

Im so sorry that ur parrents treaet you like this... even though I cant relate I love the way it flowed it made me so sad....

P.S. if you get time can you check out one of my poems and comment thanx a whole lot

Wow no one deserves this kind of treatment. You are a great poet and thank you for commenting on my poem!

Truly touching poem..I'm really sorry about the way you feel. I think you should just stand up tall, despite all the put downs, and show them what you're made of. You have to remeber, actions speak louder than words. You have to grap that lion thats deep inside your heart, and let it roar!! Keep up the good work..and never give up..life is much too exciting to forgett.

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

soo good, im sorry your parent dont listen, what ever they say dont let them bring you down, remember that. Keep it up!

amazing! this poem has depth and emotion! loved it and im sorry your parents feel that way.
xoxo
Lauren

Thats really good, your parents don't always try to get you down on purpose. sometimes it just seems that way. I know what you mean, mine are the same, but ignore them, dont let them get to you and you'll be fine
keep up the good work!

that poem was really sad. it was filled with so much emotion and thats what made amazing. i gave it a 5 even though i thought it deserved higher. keep writing because you have talent
*sarah

hey girl! i totally know how u feel...i hate it sooo much...and it is true...both my parentz do the same thing...but anywayz...i will alwayz care about u...and if ya ever wanna talk...i am here for ya...take care! luv alwayz knoxy

this is sad, but very well written... a moving poem... liked it... im so sorry if u feel that way, my dad passed away years ago, and im left here alone with mom, sometimes she treats me like that too... but anyhow i try to understand or lets say more on dont give a F+++ coz if i stress things out, ima snap and talk back ... oh well i love ur poem... hope u pass by mine and read 6 feet away, some punk rated it low i want ur comment >:D, muah

well parents r just here 2 tell us we suck and make r lives miserable...i guess they dont think we get enough of that from the rest of the world....lol well anyway, great poem....check out sum of mine if ya get the chance....thanx, keep writin!

aww.. that's SO sad.. im sorry.

great poem, i know how you feel. my parents are always saying how they were so much better than me when they were my age and how i'll never be good enough. good job tho. ciao~lee