thats was awesome! thanks for commenting on my poems!! you have great talent also!!

That was excellent, really thoughtful. It sounds like a dream to me, was it? You are very talented, i would like to read some more from you of the same genre.
Julie
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this is kewl ...check spelling n grammer though ...ive no time to list them rite now...and if u WANTED the rain to cleanse u why did u look for shelter in the first place???

Good question....but change kindaa freaks ppl out and i dont want to change

awesome! i liked it a lot. grabbed me from the very beginning. are you thinking about a part 2? just a thought... can't get enough of it! take care:)

Wow, absolutly incredible. There are no words to describe how amazing this piece is. (I don't know why it's a 4.4, to me it definetly deserves a 5)
This just left me absolutly breathless. Amazing. The imagery was impecible and was perfectly used with dark symbolism. your words are absolutly lovely and are both disturbing and beautiful. I really do admire your word choice, you have no idea what an incredibly powerful effect it gives to your work.
"The rain purge the world. Washing away the grim as each entity around me transmigrates. It arises among the filth of it's own past all lustrous to confront the future."
That is just one of the many lines I truly admired. I cannot add every line that touched me or I would end up copying the whole piece. This was absolutly amazing, no words to praise how beautiful this was.

Yup ppl i am thinkin of Part 2