Comments : Early Winter's Snow

  • 20 years ago

    by erely

    Hi Fisherman, Good Poem,I loved the last line...For now a delightful delusion

  • awesome discripion, i loved it! especially this stanza:

    Yes earth worms are actively wiggling
    Moist earth’s fragrance rising in air
    Life going on even there
    Facing cold’s challenge still giggling.

    its awesome, can u cheak out mine and comment on them? thanks, and have a nice day! :oD